There are many differences and similarities between my hometown and college town.My homrtown's population is less than my college town.And it is bigger than my college town.The weather is hotter than there.
Furthermore the city is more developed.There are much more department, stores, supermarkets, shopping centers...A lot of concert, theatres, social activities are put in order in my college town, but they don't happen them in my hometown a lot.The weather in winters, isn't too cold.It doesn't snow a lot, but in my hometown is cold in winters.On the other hand my hometown has a historical museum.
Consequently, my hometown famous for cologne and 'höşmerim'.My college town is famous for 'rooster'.This two cities are suitable for me to living.
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hi cansu your essay is like a paragraph ı think if you write it much longer it will be better than this.also it has not got a thesis statement:))
YanıtlaSilhi cansu,
YanıtlaSilYour writing is good enough in terms of its content.I really liked while you were comparing and contrasting these two cities.However,it isn't in compare and contrast essay format.There is no introduction paragraph.There are some grammatical errors."my hometown famous for cologne and 'höşmerim'"=>where is your verb?"they don't happen them in my hometown a lot"=>l think in this sentence "them" is unnecessary.If you correct them, your writing will be better.See you later.KISS YOU:)
hi cansu
YanıtlaSilyour essay is like a paragraph maybe you can improve it.but your essay is good and there are a litle mistake.see you :)