24 Ekim 2010 Pazar

Miracle Worker & Angela's Ashes

If I contrast two movies , I can say that I like 'Angela's Ashes'. Because 'Miracle Worker' is black white movie so it isn't atttractive so much. Two movies are different from each other. 'Miracle Workers' theme is hope , but Angela's Ashes' is different .Their messages are also different.' Miracle Workers' says that you never give up.As character , I like Helen . Because she is more effective than other characters. To sum up two movies are very good . : )
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  1. mehmet25 Ekim 2010 10:23

    Hi Cansu
    I read your paragraph.I like it.I think it is nice but there are some mistakes such as "contrast".In my opion compare can be right.Moreover the second film's name is "The Miracle Worker 1962" but it is not big mistake.See you later.Well done :)

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  2. Adsız28 Ekim 2010 05:56

    Hi CANSU;
    Your paragraph is clear l like it.But it is too simple.You should use longer sentences.The content and contrasting is good.Introduction and conclusion are too short.l didn't see a topic sentence.Anyway,well done. see you:)

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