18 Mart 2010 Perşembe

Beautiful Meadow ( descriptive )

I stepped through a low arch made by two vine maples pushing past the chest-high ferns into a beautiful meadow. The meadow is perfectly round as if someone had intentionally created the flawless circle, tearing out the trees but leaving non evidence of that violence in the waving grass. To the east, I can hear the stream bubbling quietly. The meadow is so stunning with the sunlight that you can only see through the cracks between the trees over my head. It is beautiful and serene. The trees are so tall that I had to lie down on the wavy grass just to see the top.
In the meadow, I see dozens and dozens of flowers of every colour. It is the wrong season for wildflowers, the ground is thick and moist so as I walked I could see my footprints behind me. The meadow has tall grass that swayed in the light breeze like ripples across a lake. As I touched the tall wet grass it tickled the tips of my fingers. The smell of the meadow was fresh and sweet which relaxed me. There are two huge rocks by the lake suitable to sit on. As I walked over to these rocks the rhythm of my footprints started to numb by mind. As I gazed over the magnificent view of the huge valley that lay before me, I can see a beautiful lake that glittered in the sunlight.
At a distance, that only could be seen when I squinted my eyes. I can see a huge, beautiful waterfall that is crashing down into a long river which caused it to make foam. Above my head, I can hear birds singing happily as they flew to their nests.
Slowly, it turned dark until I could not see my hand in front of my face. I lay down on my back, wild flowers all around me as I can see millions of tiny stars in the sky. Tonight the moon is twice the size than I ever seen it before. I can hear owls hooting in the distance. I am relaxed. I fell asleep faster than I thought I would in my beautiful meadow.

5 yorum:

  1. hi cansu,
    I like your essay.your essay construction is very good.Descriptions and examples are too effective.when i read your essay i imagine a meadow in my mind, so very good essay.Thank you for this nice writing...

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  2. hey Cansuu ! :)
    I love your blog and your obvious love for nature.In your essay,there are some mistakes.but description is good.The descriptions are so vibrant.I can imagine:)
    Really charming...
    Honey thanks for sharing , see you :D

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  3. hi cansu,
    l like this description essay but is this the homework description which is written by any author or is it your own description?Anyway thanks for sharing it..see you lovely girl:)

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  4. hi Cansu,
    I like your essay.Introduction and conclusion are very good.Your description and examples in body are very good and effective.ı can imagine when i read your essay.
    See you honey:)

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  5. hı cansu
    your essay ıs good .ıt ıncludes correct and meaıngful sentences .there are some mıstekes.but thanks for sharıng us see u

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